Michele Maize
Jun 13, 2022

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Great story, Jann. You are so creative with the way you weave the objects into this story. I can picture it all, the leather, the smoke, the little girl with her blue eyes that later comes into the story, and the cold coffee sparked my interest even more in the story. Great job! :)

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Michele Maize
Michele Maize

Written by Michele Maize

Sober Traveler | Wannabe Vegan | Yoga Addict. Dog-loving extrovert turned introvert. Owner of "The Maze". Editor at Black Bear and Globetrotters.

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